Friday, October 31, 2008

18 comments:

  1. hey look! im the first one to post a comment!

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  2. that was really great quintin. except i found myself getting bored in some parts, like it was a biography or something. try adding some flavor and excitement k?

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  3. Well, I need to add history, and this was the spot to introduce everything. It will get more exciting later on trust me.

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  4. lol.Since when did slugs get arms?Even if they are super evolved.And what year is this set in anyways?

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  5. You need to give them copper based weapons also.Coper makes thier guts come out...Don't ask how I know.It has to do with tristan and alex.Yeah that tristan and alex.

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  6. very far in the future, and nah, salt is good enough. It works for anything, poison when mixed with food and drink, and an extra kick when put on weapons. copper I guess would work, but It's not as versatile as salt.

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  7. Nobody's voting for me, man, help me out here!!!

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  8. Theres a poll?If so where cause I like your story.

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  9. On trevor's blog, he put up a poll. So far two have voted, none for me!

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  10. your welcome.I liked yours best any way...>_< XP XD XI :) :) :( (: ): (Special designed to be annoying...)

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  11. That was really good. You pay really good attention to detail, which I think is needed to be a good writer. I think its funny how all the weapons have salt in them.

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  12. yeah the weapons have salt on them but what is the weapon made of?Thats were the copper could come in.WRITE MORE ALREADY!!!!!!!!!!!

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  13. right, sorry, I've hit a snag, so don't expect the extension for a while.

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  14. yes Kaelyn, slugs. This whole thing branched from a class assignment last year, and we had to do it with slugs. I like it, it added story details on its own, like the salt blasters.

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