Wow, astounding! I once wrote a book to page 35 but then I got board even though with each sentence my writing imrpoved the story did'nt seem to be going anywhere. ha-sigh
I'm on page 28 now I think. AND YOU SHOULDN'T HAVE GIVEN UP! Unless you're right and it really was going nowhere. And even then don't give up completely! Just tweak it to make sure it's better! Thank you by the way.
I think you need to start it better, i couldn't stand to read the rest of it because of the first sentanc sorry, it just dosn't say " I AM A GREAT BOOK' if you start it that way, fix it and it'll be better.
Ok, 2 things. One, JC, if its on Barnes and Noble, then its on most others too. K? Ok. Second thing, There are several things I need to fix, not just the beginning. If you pay very close attention to the timeline, you'll see the problem.
and it's not finished yet!
ReplyDeleteWow, astounding! I once wrote a book to page 35 but then I got board even though with each sentence my writing imrpoved the story did'nt seem to be going anywhere. ha-sigh
ReplyDeleteI'm on page 28 now I think. AND YOU SHOULDN'T HAVE GIVEN UP! Unless you're right and it really was going nowhere. And even then don't give up completely! Just tweak it to make sure it's better! Thank you by the way.
ReplyDeleteseems a bit short now.post more soon!
ReplyDeleteThats awesome. It sounds like something that could be like published and sold! That must have taken forever to write. I love all the details.
ReplyDeletethank you, and that is actually my goal. to get that on the shelves of Barnes and Noble.
ReplyDeleteSpeciffically barnes and nobles?How about just a bookstore in general?
ReplyDeletewell yah, but my speciffic goal is Barnes and Noble.
ReplyDeleteYou should widen your gaol then.Alot of people don't go to barnes and nobles.
ReplyDeleteI think you need to start it better, i couldn't stand to read the rest of it because of the first sentanc sorry, it just dosn't say " I AM A GREAT BOOK' if you start it that way, fix it and it'll be better.
ReplyDeleteThe start isn't everything.(Stop terrorizing quintins blog with your pessimism!)
ReplyDeleteNo, this time she has a point.
ReplyDeleteOk, 2 things. One, JC, if its on Barnes and Noble, then its on most others too. K? Ok. Second thing, There are several things I need to fix, not just the beginning. If you pay very close attention to the timeline, you'll see the problem.
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